The Final Script (NEW)

After beginning to film our sitcom we began to feel as if some of the actions and dialogue that were taking place, did not reach the conventions of a Situation Comedy. Due to this we have taken out some of the actions and dialogue to make the episode seem more realistic to our target audience, causing it to flow better and then therefore look and sound more attractive.

This is our final script.

Shot List Changes (NEW)

When filming and creating our photographic storyboards, we found that some of our shots could be deleted or had to be slightly changed. This was because some shots did not follow the conventions of a situation comedy and also did not follow composition rules such as head room and the 180 degree rule. Therefore by changing and reducing our shots we have managed to created a more flowing and conventional piece of work that allows for the audience to understand the narrative of the episode.

Final Font Used

After asking a class of 16 students we found that 12/16 students preferred the font "Postinkantaja Job" and said that we should use that on our website as it is quite a fun font which gives a sense of a scrapbook affect like in schools, while still creating quite a street effect.

Due to the overall agreement of the students we will use this font as our main header font on our website.

Possible fonts used for Website

After completing our Primary Product Research we found that if a product is based at a younger audience the fonts and colours used should also represent that audience. Therefore I searched on http://www.dafont.com/ for many fonts in the style of what we wanted. As by looking at E4's website we decided to make our website quite graffiti and street themed as it represents a younger person. Therefore we chose to the look on the distorted styles of font and found our favourite five. However, as our programme is based around a college we want to create the idea that our font suggests a young style in a learning environment. 

Planning-Shot List (NEW)

Shot List

For our planning everyone in the group was assigned a task to do before filming. One of my tasks was to create the shot list so that we had each shot in a simple form with its framing, angle and movement. This would then be particularly helpful when creating our test shots and photographic story boards to see if anything had to be changed.

Created by Georgie Field

Storyboard Formula (NEW)

After completing our own primary product research we gained an idea of the different camera angles and shot that are conventional to Situation Comedies. We began to mind map the different types of angles and shots we should use such as Shot reverse shots and establishing shots to make our product more conventional.  

Pitch Feedback

What went well...

• Detail of characters
• Character stereotypes relate to research
• Lots of information in treatment
• Audience can relate to characters
• Same age cast to audience
• Mood board relates to characters and elements of website
• Moodboard show inspiring shows which are popular with target audience
• Lots of attention to detail

What I could have improved...

• More action in script
• More detail on setting